Some people think that only managers should make decisions in the company. while others think that employees should also be involved in the process of decision-making. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People’s opinions are divided whether there should be any involvement of staff members in decision-making process or managers are the only ones who need to decide for the company. From my perspective, I hold a firm believe that a company’s operation can become more effective if employees contribute their effort in any projects.
It is undeniable that employees play an indispensable role in every organisation. First, by consulting ideas from the staff members, the top management can make easier decisions in important projects. This is because managers will be given a wider range of options which help them save time for other crucial tasks. In addition to this, staff members’ opinions may come in handy as employees are directly involved the company’s projects and these workers are the ones who need to implement the plan from their managers. Hence, their contributions can bring more benefits rather than harms for the organisation.
Apart from the abovementioned practical concerns, managers are believed to be the only key factor in decision-making process. The main reason is that most managers are often recruited or promoted based on their qualification as well as their experience. As a result, their decisions can be more transparent and assertive whereas employees’ ideas may take more time for reconsideration. Moreover, since people’s personalities differ from one to another, having a great number of thoughts in decision-making process may result in work conflict between members, leading to unproductive working time. Therefore, final decisions of any assignment should be made by executives in order to avoid inefficiency.
Taking everything into consideration, this reinforces my perspective that any employees in an organisations should be a part of the decision-making process because of their vital role in the company.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, apart from, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34368419561 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0202647208 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294250779508 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111118713999 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896257300242 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192694120051 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589368197954 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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