Health is the most precious thing for human life. People has to maintain their health for them to be able to continue their daily activities. However, the decreasing benchmark of quality and quantity on health is said to be likely to happen in the upcoming era. Responding to this, this essay will explain why I agree with the health quality is degrading.
The expansion of many varieties of foods and beverages leads to an unhealthy consumption. Many of delicious foods consists toxins which can harm human's body. However, people all around the world keep consuming unhealthy intake such as junk foods since they are yummy and affordable despite acknowledging the negative impact. As a result, diseases as cancer and health complications often occur which lead to sickness or even death.
Aside from the physical health, another supporting reason is that many people underestimate the emotional well-being when it is equally severe as the physical harm. In fact, it may lead to a disastrous impact for human's body. This is backed by the stress due to mounting work demand which adds emotional burden and forces people for not having enough sleep. It may result in psychological distortion and disease.
Bringing everything together, I am on the same side with the statement. I believe that the unhealthy lifestyle trend and expensive healthy products greatly contribute to the degradation of human's health standard in the future. Therefore, the government should help by regulating a more accessible access to healthy products and socialize the importance of mental health.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, as to, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23622047244 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77285004596 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629921259843 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0353685777 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187761272075 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560581803632 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051431185192 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106155192285 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678052923349 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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