Being able to speak a foreign language is an advantage these days. Some people think that children should start learning a foreign language at primary school, while others think children should begin in secondary school.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays we live in a global world which means people who live in different countries can travel to other areas easily, therefore mastering a kind of foreign language is useful and even essential. That is why many people start to push their kids to learn foreign language, like English, when the kids entering primary school. From my perspective, I believe it is better for kids to begin learning foreign language in secondary school.
There is no doubt that bilingual or multilingual workers gain more edge than other peers. Many employers value language skills because of the potential of opening up new markets or the ability to communicate with foreign customers. This should explain why some parents are eager to let their children learn a foreign language from primary school. However, it seems these advocators has ignore one thing, because the age of this period is also the best age of learning one’s own mother tone. If the kids cannot understand the method of using their native language, it is also difficult to learn how to use foreign language.
I believe the important thing of learning foreign language is to let the kids living in an environment which full of native users. To start learning foreign language from an earlier age may possibly badly affect kids to learn mother tone. Moreover, some children just know which language they are interested in after entering the high school. And we all know interest is the best teacher. And these children are learn language with own motivation so they probably will have better study results.
Overall, I believe it will give more benefits to kids if they learned foreign language in secondary school.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: With 'eager to', use the base form of the verb: 'let'.
Suggestion: let
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Message: Use past participle here: 'ignored'.
Suggestion: ignored
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Message: Use simply 'may', 'possibly'.
Suggestion: may; possibly
...ng foreign language from an earlier age may possibly badly affect kids to learn mother tone....
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Line 9, column 187, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'may'.
Suggestion: may
...ng foreign language from an earlier age may possibly badly affect kids to learn mother tone....
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Line 9, column 227, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to mother'
Suggestion: to mother
...may possibly badly affect kids to learn mother tone. Moreover, some children just know...
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Line 9, column 413, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...he best teacher. And these children are learn language with own motivation so they pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, kind of, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05017921147 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48062338445 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537634408602 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5389092049 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.642857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343218684667 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129144513808 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087023729324 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231024650891 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172486960324 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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