The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
From the diagram, we can see that clay should through six steps to become bricks and then these bricks will be delivered to building site or storage.
In the first step, the digger dig the clay which is the raw material for bricks. Then the lumps of clay are placed on a metal grid so that the big one can be broken up into smaller one. And these material fall on a roller which will aid sand and water when going into the next step. The mixture has two method to shape, one is through wire cutter and become cuboid, the other way is shaped by mould.
Then these fresh bricks will be placed in a drying oven and they stay there for 24 to 48 hours to dry. After be dried out, the bricks will then transferred to a workplace where the temperature increase into 200 to 980 degree to moderate. And then the temperature raise higher to 870 to 1300 degree. This process call kiln. And then the bricks will be cooled for 48 to 72 hours in a cooling chamber. And finally they are packaged by workers and deliver to other places.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30256410256 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.02809977359 2.65546596893 76% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8372380328 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2727272727 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105603366137 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041802572938 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356481441518 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769846018877 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263426240267 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.2329268293 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 61.2550243902 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 11.4140731707 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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