Being a celebrity, such as a famous film star or sports personality, brings problems as well as benefits.
Do the advantages of being a celebrity outweigh the disadvantages?
Many people often wonder how it feels like to be a celebrity. While some believe fame can bring advantages, in my view, the drawbacks are more significant.
There are several benefits of being a famous person. Firstly, when people become well-known, this usually means their talents and efforts are widely recognised. They are also admired by others, which gives them a sense of satisfaction. For example, it would be great for football players to hear fans chanting their names during a game. Secondly, because celebrities are often able to influence their followers’ opinions and behaviour, they are increasingly hired by large brands to endorse their products. This allows them to earn even more income outside their main occupation. Thus, celebrities can derive some pleasure from their popularity.
Nevertheless, there are also great problems associated with fame. The first one is that celebrities often draw constant attention from the public. The media tends to follow them everywhere they go, which means their privacy is seriously violated. For instance, it is common to see a famous singer’s dating stories being publicized against their will. Sometimes, more extreme cases happen when celebrities’ private photos and videos are leaked on the Internet. Additionally, famous individuals such as movie stars or athletes are often required to keep putting more effort into training to sharpen their skills and maintain their popularity. As a result, it is inevitable that celebrities face more pressure in their daily life compared to an ordinary person.
In conclusion, I believe being popular brings more problems for the people concerned. Although celebrities can have greater satisfaction as well as earn more money, these benefits are exceeded by the stress and privacy concerns that they need to deal with.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: tend
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40559440559 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77930462653 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629370629371 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4254815155 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8888888889 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27777777778 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227548082551 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770243508442 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749856044204 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14255568284 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415009417055 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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