In this era of digital technology, internet is a growing necessaity of human lives. It has got many advantages, however some people think that it creates hurdle to them. In my opinion, I slightly agree with this view as the merits of internet outweighs its disadvantages. Internet connects people from different parts of the world and it has crucial role in this age of globaliztion. This essay will first look up on merits of internet and then, will discuss how its creates problem with some suggestion to overcome associated problem.
Firstly, internet has been playing an important role in connceting people from various parts of the world. The emergence of various social media apps like; Instagram, facebook and twitter makes effortless information sharing and learning. The activities of buying and selling goods is nomore limited to demogarphy and perhaps, more importantly it is possible to make money sitting at home. similarly, Intenet banking facilities for instance; has made it possible to pay bills, look up for bank statement and top up mobile balance just by sitting at one place.Moreover, people can have access to global environment throgh online work collaboration and also, culture sharing through entertainment networking sites.
However, the dominant of internet might be horrifying to some people if it is misused. With the growing popularity of internet, cyber crime such as; bullying, stalkers and trolls is increasing radipdly all over the world. Nonethless, there is a law against these crime. But the serious concern of many people regarding internet is social isolation, depression and distraction of focus. Particularly, young people are more addicted to games, chatting, and pornography. Thereby, they are feeling loniliness and depression. In additon to this, the dispaly of scams and advertisemnt is fostering the behaviour of people to use internet. Regardless these concerns, it is difficult to work, and move forward without the use of internet.
These problems can be overcomed easily by limiting dependency towards internet. The more use of internet make us use it more in day to day life. For example; if we upload pictures on social media, we feel need to check comments and likes that people give to that uploaded picture. Similarly, it is important to set the time limit for using internt. One need to learn to maintain work life balance. using safe passwords, confining limit to the personal information sharing helps people to elimite hurdles internet create in their daily life.
To sum up, Internet plays cruicial role in todys world of digital technology as it brings many advenatges like; acess to information and learning, global exposure and easy conncetion with people living in various parts of the world. Despite its disadantages, the merits outweghs in real world. I belive one needs to have self control and knowledge for using internet otherwise it can have nagative consequence in people' s live.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 41.998997996 181% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2491.0 1615.20841683 154% => OK
No of words: 474.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2552742616 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83801072332 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 176.041082164 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559071729958 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 785.7 506.74238477 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2420474801 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8076923077 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227999027194 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640963768023 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584784344074 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134057390485 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861400162824 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 78.4519038076 185% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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