Over the past few decades, the role of women is shifting to fit in ever changing society thereby inviting negative consequences to parential resposibilities towards their children. Many women now work to be financially independent and tend to have less time to care for their children leading to unfaithful behavior in teenagers. In my opinion, I moderately agree to this view as the young people are now involving in more illegal activities as a result of absence of parental guideance.
The amout of time parents spend with their children palys a significant role in determining future of children. But in todays century with the growth of a need to live quality life, both parents are engaged in fulltime job. In this case, children lacks emotional support when mother doesnot spend enough time with their child which affects greatly in their mental health. Frustration and lonliness is a common among these childrens and as a result this leads to yougsters involving in drugs, voilence and even in murder case. Children knowingly or unknowingly do mistakes when there is no one to correct that, they unaware about what is wrong and right. These kids as a result of misguidance tend to involve in criminal acts like; drugs, rubbery, abuse and even in murder.
In addition to this, children often needs to have proper care from mother otherwise there is a chance that they might get support and care from their peers. The peer influence does have a impact in human lives parcularly among youngsters like; children doesnot tell truth to their parents. And, even trust is another issue among children. However, working women when become financially stable and independent aid to provide a quality life to her family. Even more, she does not need to depend upon her husband all life. Bihar, a state of india where most of the women stay at home all day long by taking care of children and family, but still unable to provide better education and health. Thus, womens giving full time to their child doesnot ensure better children.
But one needs to balance work life in order to take good care of their child and develop trust.
In conclusion, the consequence of more working women is not a single cause of juvenile delinquency, but if children needs proper guidance and care in order to develop prsonality and for good mental health. But with full time guidance also, children might live in poor life without better education and food. Thus, i believe both parennts in family needs to maintain work life balance, sphere a more time with their child and build trust for better future of their child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, thus, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 41.998997996 179% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2171.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 442.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91176470588 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47322737896 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515837104072 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 680.4 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0025640183 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.55 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180970232118 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057295084675 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060828395898 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117139267306 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761818797731 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.