Beside a lot of advantages, some people believe that the Internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In the era of advanced technologies, the Internet can be viewed as a widely influential breakthrough due to its advantages for human beings’ lives. However, there have been some highly debatable arguments that people’s lives is increasingly dependent on the Internet that leads to some annoying issues in life or work. In my opinion, I totally agree with that statement that the Internet is actually causing some issues to us relating to health, self-independence and creativity.
It can be indisputable that our life becomes dependent strongly on using the Internet because of its convenience and applicability. In particular, the Internet make our troubles in the daily life much easier from work to entertainment because just clicking on the symbol of Internet in our computer will provide us a wide access to all our necessities like listening to music or seeking for strange information and even, playing video games in our free time. From that viewpoint, it can be recognized that our staying on the Internet all day is inevitable that can put our health in danger like pinkeye or headache or autism…
More than that, the Internet also contribute to the weakness of our creativity and self-independence in work or study. The line of reasoning lies in the fact that when we are faced with dilemmas, we have a tendency to ask and seek the answer on the Internet by searching tools like Google or Twitter…As a result, our creativity will be got rid of over time and further, our ability of being self-independent in solving problems will be weakened sooner or later.
To sum up, there still exists more problems that the Internet can cause to us in both life and work in spite of its superb applicability. To avoid being affected heavily, we should learn to make the best use of the Internet in a proper way for our natural development in terms of fundamental knowledge and significant skills.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 315, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'wide access'.
Suggestion: wide access
...nternet in our computer will provide us a wide access to all our necessities like listening t...
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Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
... searching tools like Google or Twitter…As a result, our creativity will be got ri...
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Line 4, column 224, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...rn to make the best use of the Internet in a proper way for our natural development in terms of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, still, in particular, as a result, in my opinion, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95015576324 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04903110471 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542056074766 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.7623011915 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.555555556 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.6666666667 20.7667163134 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2222222222 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121112964836 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636018323847 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437689605755 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850882737995 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059614112666 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.