As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming
more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalization. Some
people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural
identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
To serve the demands of economical benefits, many countries around the world is increasingly expanding diplomatic relations with others. As a consequence of that policy, those countries have a tendency to establish a common mass market where trading and transporting activities are simplified on their territories. Nowadays, a term “ globalization is used to define that trend. Some arguments have recently suggested that globalization will gradually get rid of cultural identities of countries all over the world. But I totally disagree with that statement.
Firstly, it can be indisputable that globalization has made a substantial contribution to the development of each country and region. Not only it makes a huge incentive to the emergence of potential economies of many countries but it still also improves considerably the life of people living in those countries. For one thing, convenience in trading and a huge decrease in the cost of production lines due to the globalization help to establish more factories and manufactures in member countries that lead to more opportunities for people. As a result, those countries can become more rich and avoid the outcome of unexpected economic crisis.
Furthermore, globalization may help spreading the cultural identities of many countries to others and due to that, the tourism industry of those countries will have the chance to develop by itself. One important thing need to be claimed that the cultural identities of each country is a state-owned property and therefore, the saying that their values are forecast to be decreased due to globalization is not justifiable. On the contrary, globalization even make significant earnings for each country to be able to maintain tourism industry in a stable way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
To serve the demands of economical benefits, many countries around the wor...
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Line 1, column 332, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: '”' seems to be missing
... on their territories. Nowadays, a term “ globalization is used to define that tr...
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Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to spread' or 'spread'.
Suggestion: to spread; spread
...s. Furthermore, globalization may help spreading the cultural identities of many countri...
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Line 3, column 541, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a stable way" with adverb for "stable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...to be able to maintain tourism industry in a stable way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, still, therefore, as a result, for one thing, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38989169675 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2525693444 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548736462094 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.526270059 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.416666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192018993817 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716587133735 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453957697575 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130097059714 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162502515204 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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