Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society?
* Having the right to show one’s own attitudes or ideologies freely has been major concern of society for many years. Not only it helps building a solid foundation of fairness and civilization in a society, but it also contributes to the efficiently all-round development of the whole society. Therefore, I am of the opinion that the right of performing each individual’s attitudes in a society should be encouraged widely and reasonably.
There is no denying that the right of showing private attitudes is likely to create an fair and civilized environment for everyone living in a community or a society. In particular, people are always being educated to live and work legally from their childhood and if each individual of them can feel a sense of fairness and legality in their living places, they will firmly respect all regulations and rights imposed by the laws that can lead to a more stable and sustainable society over time. Otherwise, the outbreak of riots and unrest is inevitable because their belief in the legalization system does not be maintained anymore.
More than that, freedom in showing each individual’s own thoughts or ideas may be a driving force for the all-round development of the whole society. The line of reasoning lies in the fact that in all the domains of society, if workers of one corporation or business have the right to perform their extraordinary or uncommon ideas, there is no doubt that those corporations or businesses can discover a new key formula of their success sooner or later. For instance, as being spread widely by story-tellers, the establishment of giant technology corporations like Google or Alibaba comes from small discussions between close friends in their garage at home or in their study room. To add to it, there still exists some advices or observations claimed by powerful businessmen that maybe a booming success is a result of normal ideas or unexpected chats between extraordinary people.
To sum up, I totally agree with the statement that freedom in showing private attitudes or thoughts is very crucial, especially in terms of the overall development of the whole society. If people have the chance to live in such an environment, they should make the best of the right that they have to make their society sustainably stronger.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to build' or 'build'.
Suggestion: to build; build
...ciety for many years. Not only it helps building a solid foundation of fairness and civi...
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Line 2, column 85, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...g private attitudes is likely to create an fair and civilized environment for ever...
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Line 2, column 357, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ess and legality in their living places, they will firmly respect all regulations...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, therefore, for instance, in particular, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04712041885 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95613480167 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541884816754 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3698645181 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.666666667 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8333333333 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0638434895794 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0266735488054 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275773867833 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0471639374499 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250629173164 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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