Some people think that mental strength is the most important factor for success in sports. However, some others believe that it is more important to have strong and fit people. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
In sport, to gain particular achievements, sportsmen themselves are always required to maintain their determination and improve their flairs and skills on a regular basis. However, there have recently been some arguments saying that concentrating on developing mental health or physical health is enough to take more substantial advantages over their opponents towards their own success. In this essay, the importance and role of each of them will be discussed.
By people those who supports the development of physical health, it can simply be understood that physical health can be viewed as a fundamental background for pursuing sports career. The majority of sports involve in the intense movement of almost all internal organs which can reveal each person’s level of performance. By that reason, all athletes or footballers are obliged to satisfy the demands of medical examination before being enrolled for advanced training courses.
On the contrary, other people assert that mental health is a driving force for sportsmen to reach their own success. The line of reasoning lies in the fact that at the same level of their physical strength, relentless determination, which arises from maintaining a good mental health, is the only thing that make the huge discrepancy between winners and losers. To own that ability, it takes sportsmen a lot of time, energy and effort and its result can even be striking records that no athlete has ever broken.
Although I am not a professional sportsman, but as an amateur footballer, I am of the opinion that success in sports is the outcome of combining both above-mentioned criteria perfectly. Be sportsmen having only physical strength, in some cases, they can be discouraged by harsh challenges of highly-competitive competitions. Meanwhile, owning the poor condition of physical health will blow the valuable chance for sportsmen to step into more advanced training courses towards their forward successes.
To put it in a nut shell, I pen down saying that physical and mental strength always attach its significance to the success of sportsmen. The responsibility of athletes is to keep both of them in the best condition to make use of anytime in challenging competitions in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...challenging competitions in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, in particular, in some cases, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29131652661 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05195409676 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.5575932144 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.928571429 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176945798939 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598652585382 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433660706986 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959761354779 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204226078646 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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