Beside a lot of advantages, some people believe that the Internet creates more problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In the current society, it is universally believed that the internet has been gaining its
popularity at an amazing rate. Some people assert that the internet bring us a lot of
benefits while many others argue that its drawbacks should not be ignored. It is quite
understandable that people from different backgrounds put different interpretations
on the same issue.
Those who favor that the internet has many advantages give their reasons as follows.
In the first place, it is obvious that the internet brings us great convenience and
efficiency. For example, we can send Emails to our friends in other countries in a
few minutes while sending a traditional letter takes us at least a week and costs much.
In the second place, it is a well-known fact that we can make friends with people
from all parts of world. Apparently, It overcomes the geographical barriers and
makes the world smaller. Furthermore, it is true that the internet accelerates the flow
of information and spreads education to all corners of the globe. In other words, we
can have easy and quick access to the latest information worldwide.
On the other hand, some other people hold different attitudes argue that the internet
has many weaknesses. For one thing, it seems that it can easily lead to psychological
problems. For instance, an internet-addicted person tends to be isolated, self-centered and unsociable. For another, it is obvious that there is a sharp rise in the number of cyber-crimes. More and more financial crimes such as money laundering
are committed via the internet. In addition, it also has negative impacts on young
people because there are a lot of obscene and violent contents on line.
There is probably a little bit of truth in both arguments. For my part, I completely
agree with the latter view that the internet has more disadvantages than advantages.
It gives rise to people’s mental problem. It results in various computer crimes. It is
harmful to the growth of the youth. Therefore, something should be done as soon as
possible to protect people from negative effects of the internet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...isolated, self-centered and unsociable. For another, it is obvious that there is a ...
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Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... contents on line. There is probably a little bit of truth in both arguments. For my part...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... It results in various computer crimes. It is harmful to the growth of the youth....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, for one thing, in other words, it is true, in the first place, in the second place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93192003677 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554285714286 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4215560808 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1363636364 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1975974994 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504247703091 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478401098955 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0525533766824 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530716053793 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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