The best way to reduce the number of traffic accidents is to make all young drivers complete a safe driving education course before being licensed to drive.

Essay topics:

The best way to reduce the number of traffic accidents is to make all young drivers complete a safe driving education course before being licensed to drive.

Now a days the accidents are increasing day by day.so for awareness of traffic accidents all the drivers first should get licence.
The more traffic accidents are because of young drivers and not having the proper roads.As we are seeing that youth does not follow the traffic rules and the driving will be so rude.If the rain falls then the roads will be so damaged with full of water and manholes.For instance,two days back I saw one situation two members going on a bike with full speed and the traffic signal was owned they passed over the signal after going some distance they both fallen in a terrible situation and they were spot dead.
On the other hand,we should not give permission to drive the old mens.

Votes
Average: 2.2 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days the accidents are increasing day by day...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Now a days the accidents are increasing day by day...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 88, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...drivers and not having the proper roads.As we are seeing that youth does not follo...
^^
Line 2, column 182, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...c rules and the driving will be so rude.If the rain falls then the roads will be s...
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Line 2, column 266, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...damaged with full of water and manholes.For instance,two days back I saw one situat...
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Line 2, column 278, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , two
... full of water and manholes.For instance,two days back I saw one situation two membe...
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Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
... they were spot dead. On the other hand,we should not give permission to drive the...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, for instance, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 41.998997996 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 589.0 1615.20841683 36% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 127.0 315.596192385 40% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63779527559 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35699682299 4.20363070211 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27328712126 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 176.041082164 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669291338583 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 175.5 506.74238477 35% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 194.354201281 49.4020404114 393% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 196.333333333 106.682146367 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.3333333333 20.7667163134 204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.3333333333 7.06120827912 245% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180364653017 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113248745032 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.020270221717 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113248745032 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020270221717 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 13.0946893788 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.77 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.52 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 78.4519038076 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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