The best way to reduce the number of traffic accidents is to make all young drivers complete a safe driving education course before being licensed to drive.
Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays the traffic accidents are in majority committed by inexperienced teenagers. some people believes that youngsters should not have the right to drive alone or ta least be more prepared with classes of road education.
In my opinion the actual drive license process do not prepare properly these young adults for the real life outside. However the government should discuss this problem further and make the safe driving education compulsory during the driver's license process. It can help prevent and saving lives, making them aware of what each mistake can cause to another person beside them or even a strange walking on the street or some driving next to your car.
For example in USA they have implemented safe driving as a mandatory part of the curriculum in the high schools, the number of accidents involving youngsters dropped drastically. A research in UK proves that the teenagers who had the safe driving education at school do not exceed the speed limit during their five years of license, which is pretty significant as before the course became mandatory the biggest number of speed infraction were on the age of 17-20.
In conclusion have the safe road driving course implemented is extremely important to decrease the number of accidents. We can prepare better our young generation to be more careful and mindful driving.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1221719457 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60001905706 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642533936652 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2790013411 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.777777778 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331146317775 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122901029793 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518015352441 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174900724229 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389534988366 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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