Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree Provide relevant examples if necessary
In recent years, there is an ongoing debate between high salary and job pleasure, which one is more important. While many claim that higher the income, better the life, I certainly believe that one should have a sense of satisfaction from his job.
At the outset, there are hundreds of reasons, why most of people prefer high paying work over the work they actually like. The most important one is that they measure success with the amount of wages they get every month. In society, people not only compare their pay-cheque with others but also consider it as an award of achievement. Another one is that they believe that they can upgrade their life by earning more and it will lead to peaceful life ahead.
However, another facet to this argument is that, very few people understand that monetary value of a job can only be compared to fuel for a car. Fuel is important for a car to run but it’s not only thing required. Likewise, sense of fulfillment in a job is the utmost necessary to survive in a job for long period. If one loves his job, he will become more skilled in that field and eventually higher skills will get him higher money in future. Whereas, if one is not satisfied by his day-to-day job, that work will become monotonous. This will not only gradually increase boredom in the job and but this will lead to degrade the quality of work, which may eventually hurt his personal life.
Aforementioned arguments suggest that, even though higher salary is important for better life, happiness and gratification in the work are extremely important. Pleasure in what you do, may lead to improvement in the quality of work, which may help you achieve higher and richer physical life as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun claim seems to be countable; consider using: 'many claims'.
Suggestion: many claims
...ure, which one is more important. While many claim that higher the income, better the life...
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Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...set, there are hundreds of reasons, why most of people prefer high paying work over the work t...
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Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...higher skills will get him higher money in future. Whereas, if one is not satisfied by hi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, likewise, may, so, well, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45220082556 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.8242804117 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.142857143 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135205285382 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504029504603 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354861032981 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866450064802 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355969878845 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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