Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Getting a high income is more crucial than having happiness with the job. I strongly disagree about this topic /with the given statement because job satisfaction contributes to an employee’s mental health and productivity.
The first reason is that it may cause mental illness if people are not satisfied with their jobs. In other words, being unpleasant during working hours with colleagues can make an unhealthy atmosphere and lead to long-term stress. For example, a recent study suggests that working under pressure is the main cause of stress and lead to suicide. In addition to suicide, depression from work of employee also leads to several more problems for the company and may result in the creativity of workers and the company’s overall performance.
Another reason for disagreeing that money is not more important than happiness in work is that unpleasant environment will affect the productivity of workers in the company. Due to the stress created between employees, the quality of work can be affected and reduced. For a longterm situation, the company will be damaged and those workers might get into trouble and fired. Most survey respondents said that stress and anxiety from work are from the relationship between people in the same working area which affects work quality and quantity and this contributes to firing the employees.
In conclusion, I do not agree that high salary is more important than having a satisfying job because it can make the workers get more stress and affect work quality which causes employees to be fired.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17716535433 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71131816696 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53937007874 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4743775493 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.545454545 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150077575614 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632817475024 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855366112526 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125652989909 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965020735708 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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