Blood sports have been a part of human community, where people to have fun risk animals life. However, some sections of population believe that it is not a part of ideal society and should be banned. Withstanding, I extremely agree with this assertion.
To commence with, blood sports, in this contemporary era, are considered as uncivilized activity. But, still numerous nations have not made it illegale. wheresa, it is morally and ethically wrong, as, all animals have right to enjoy their freedom. Any person should not be allowed to risk animals life merely for their enjoyment or to make money. Besides this, creatures also feel pain like humams and equally shares this earth. But, these people keep animals in hostile conditions, with improper diet and health check up. To illustrate, bulls used in fight are never diagnosed, moreover neither they are fed properly. Hence, these activities are against nature so should be banned.
Secondly, these sports spread wrong message to future generation. When children watch these inhumane scenes, they are affected and eventually when they grow up their conduct become brutal towards wildlife. For instance, recent research have shown that behaviour of juveniles was kind towards animals in the countries, where blood sports was banned. Therefore, this idea will assist uprise their position. At last, wildlife is imperative part of natural surroundings and if these games continue it will lead to reduction in number of some particular creatures. Ultimately, to be worse it can make them extinct. Deducing making blood sports out of law will only have positive impact.
In conclusion, as I aforementioned animals are vital part of society and using them for money does not seems to be right. Therefore, banning it is good decision and should be implemented as soon as possible
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2406779661 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63145623325 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633898305085 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0151628348 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263607981688 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709411986715 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648927218881 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160082015763 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189786899923 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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