Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
In the present age with developing of technology, the Internet has stood out of all priorities for people. About the Internet utilize online shopping is a controversial issue among people. It is agreed that e-commerce has dramatically changed the way of people do business and purchase product and services. It is clearly seen that except for few disadvantages, online shopping has a glamorous benefit, and it will dominate the global businesses even more in a future.
For one, among online lucrative services, our less attention and careless invite hackers to misuse our private information like credit card details. In addition to this, some web sites or cannels in social networks tempt people to buy items or services and collecting the fees from customers without any further action. For preventing those people traps some web sites like Amazon or e-bay are offering a secured system to enable their customers to enjoy the shopping safely. These web sites have a green lack symbol appears on the main web site pages for anyone who is willing to buy online.
On the other hand, it has been proven that the Internet has been offering a lot of advantages for those who like shopping. For instance, online purchasing is providing a wide variety of product to customers. They can compare a product with their price, quality and even slight specification. As these shows, this way of shopping eliminates traveling and wasting the time in shopping malls. Besides that most of the time, the products are cheaper because sellers do not need to have a physical place.
In conclusion, it has been proven that online shopping not only easy to access, but also it is so convenience. Thus, it is highly recommended.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 537, Rule ID: WEB_SITE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'website'?
Suggestion: website
...a green lack symbol appears on the main web site pages for anyone who is willing to buy ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, thus, except for, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98251748252 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68938402693 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587412587413 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0041267408 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134148753486 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428766536971 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039320486873 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766145797675 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418282230518 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.