The people are being engaged more and more with purchaising products and servises virtually. I think, despite of having some demerits of it, the benefits are far more.
One the one hand, those items and services people purchase over online cannot be bought in a shop. For example, the mobile phone that has been made in USA is not possible to buy in person to the people of Bangladesh, however, they just can order it online and receive it. Therefore, the people can have all the thing whatever they need in their hand. Moreover, if a patient is asking for doctor's advice and prescription sitting at home, he just have to make a call to the doctor and tell the illness he have, the dortor will give him advice and medicines so that he can get rid from diseases. Furthermore, If terms of purchaising any tickets of bus, train or even plain, we can just go through their web sites and make it happen. Last week, for instance, i bought a ticket of train to go to Dhaka sitting at home, and that save my money which i might needed for go to the station.
On the other hand, there is a chance to get fraudulent by the dishonest businessman. To illustrate, if someone ordered a original product, they might not receive it or might receive the duplicate one. The same thing happened to one of my friends, for instance, he ordered a brand new mobile phone from a website, however, when he recieve it, he realise that it is a copy phone. As a result of this his whole money was wasted.
In colclusion, I believe that though ordering online have a chance of being cheated, it is a great way to have something whatever you want. So, people sould be aware while purchasing things virtually, and take the advantage of it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The people are being engaged more and more w...
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Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e mobile phone that has been made in USA is not possible to buy in person to the ...
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Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...l to the doctor and tell the illness he have, the dortor will give him advice and me...
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Line 3, column 757, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ake it happen. Last week, for instance, i bought a ticket of train to go to Dhaka...
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Line 3, column 784, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'going', 'gonna'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: going; gonna
...or instance, i bought a ticket of train to go to Dhaka sitting at home, and that save...
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Line 3, column 845, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...g at home, and that save my money which i might needed for go to the station. ...
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Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...sman. To illustrate, if someone ordered a original product, they might not receiv...
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Line 5, column 346, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'realises'.
Suggestion: realises
...ebsite, however, when he recieve it, he realise that it is a copy phone. As a result of...
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Line 5, column 379, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...it, he realise that it is a copy phone. As a result of this his whole money was wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48881789137 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45696664077 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55910543131 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8082035699 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.357142857 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0942233742542 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372383377711 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377140544894 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712156969357 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491148131214 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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