Can poverty be the hindrance to the education If yes provide some solutions to the

Essay topics:

Can poverty be the hindrance to the education? If yes provide some solutions to the.

poverty is the biggest problem which directly impact on children's education. so they face many difficulty for completing study. this essay will explain remedies how student easily take schooling.
Firstly, government can play major role for reinforce education to poor learner. Number of scholarship programme can organise by nation for providing study and issues guideline to every university and school for giving highest discount to below poverty line adolescents who may not strong as a financially. For example, Punjab government issues ten percent budget for below poverty line person which offer free education. Therefore, if country focus' on that issue , than it may vanish in future.
Secondly, wealthy people should give money on youngsters' schooling and not paying unwanted expensive which would build carry for poor infant. Although rich masses pay tax to government, they does not forget their responsibility toward citizen. For instance, Bollywood actor Salman khan support one thousand pupil study each year in Mumbai. Moreover all person should fulfil their duties toward society.
Thirdly, Better occupation can be granted by government authority to poor human. After making financially stable, they can effort their child's study. The recent research of employment department in india showed that sixty percent generation unemployed. so independence of parents is essential for children's bright future.
In the conclusion, this complication can automatically improve if community learn their liability.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76888888889 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7496787131 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.733333333333 0.561755894193 131% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9771277666 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.125 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0625 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117188830159 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347525918467 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441582189814 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.059157008991 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408375369895 0.056905535591 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.59 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.58 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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