Most developed countries spend a large proportion of their health budgets on expensive medical technology and procedures. This money should spend instead on health education to keep people well. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
it is often argued that highest amount of money should spend on high rate medical care instead of health study to people for become fit by nation. I am totally agree with this point of view. this essay will explain why medical treatment is essential and discuss some benefits of health awareness programmes.
Although fitness awareness programme can distribute knowledge to citizen about disease,it cannot cure hazardous disease likewise serious accident have need to diagnose and do medical procedures. Many disease like cancer and strokes cannot be avoided just health education. it requires quick treatment for saving life.
Secondly, health awareness programme only give knowledge to person but it cannot change habit of the people in daily routine because person does not like to carry out that information in their lifestyle. For example, young generation continually like to eat junk food after learning negative impact of it on their body. Moreover health education system only play bit role in people s life if they try to follow instruction, otherwise it does not help them.
On the other hand, Heath study have made great contribution for removing spread epidemic like bird flu,covid-19, small box and other viral infection. people have realised importance of hygiene environment. For instance, AIDS has been only controlled with access of media and education programmes. So health education is best way to providing information to community about perilous infection.
In the conclusion, decision of the government spending high budgetary allocation on health treatment is considerable for citizen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.456 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74885867225 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4726411368 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4285714286 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221473861775 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722023440161 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558266981913 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120772898511 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825879369467 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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