Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games.
What are the positive and negative impacts of playing computer games.
The use of computer technology has spread on worldwide, specially for children who have addictive to electronic games. This essay will explain benefit and drawback of it.
The major advantages of computerized game, it properly use the idle time and cut the stress burden of the student, After spending few minutes on favourite games, they feel more energy and get strength to concentrate on their study again. Even they stay much time at home which safe them poor friends company. Secondly, it is the best way to learning of new vocabulary words of english and improve mathematics skill, because many puzzle software games available on computer and smartphones such as world puzzle games and x 2 blocks. As well as it also help the student in competitive exam. Although it make addictive to learner,it is offer better knowledgeable platform to youth.
In spite of merits of video games, it is harmful for student's fitness. Since they consumed many hours on online games, it directly impact on child's vision. Recent survey of health department showed that eighty percent of student have a week eyesight problem in school. Furthermore, Obesity is the another disadvantage of indoor games cause of lack of physical activities. eventually fat does not burn in pupil's body which expand several disease likewise diabetes, cholesterol and so on .Therefore, they should not influence habit to play it on daily basis for saving themself for bad consequences.
In the conclusion, computer games has become the part of human life, however they cannot neglect the side effect of infant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11627906977 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70641460372 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686046511628 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2728663908 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.538461538 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195789827513 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052910619316 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584788524134 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114454343712 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181508163932 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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