In a cashless society, people use more credit cards, do you think cashless society is realistic and why? What are the advantages and disadvantages?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is the hype of cashless technology and it essentially has led to a discussion, as to whether cashless has beneficial impacts to human's society. As such, there are both merits and demerits to this trend, although I am of the opinion that the positive effects outweigh the negative ones.
To begin with, there is a myriad of reasons why cashless significantly facilitates and sharpen today's modern society. Yet, the most preponderant one lies in the fact that the booming of cryptocurrency technology including Bitcoin and Litecoin services which tremendously ease the way people making online transaction on a daily basis. Furthermore, cashless provides such convenient way for shopaholics to enjoy a discount day with hassle-free and wallet's burden. More specifically, according to a survey from three universities in Australia, approximately ninety percent of the respondents agree that if it were not for cashless, they would not be able to experience such enormous improvements in their lives.
On the other hands, as the famous saying: every coin has two sides, someone holds other opinions, and they believe that cashless is detrimental because of its insecurity and lack of privacy. Based on a numerous of hacked incidents in the last two decades, cashless apparently has caused concerns to security's experts. Hence it is apparently why many are against of it.
To conclude, it is an irrefutable fact that cashless has become a magical elixir of everyone's life because it essentially facilitates the development of our well being. Although cashless may have some negative impacts from the aforementioned, I still believe that such technology is advantageous for human development and essential in this globalised world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, still, well, as to, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36298932384 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11490577886 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601423487544 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.214750457 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193605104797 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710511338703 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442986423231 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109076269613 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199211077543 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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