You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.

Essay topics:

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.

Dear John,

Hope this letter finds you well. I have landed safely in Dubai. I really enjoyed the holiday I spent with you guys. This was one of the best holidays ever. I am writing to thank you and to request you for the wallet I left at your house.

I want to thank you from the bottom of my heart for having me at your place and making the trip so special. Last week was hands-down the best time of my life as I have never witnessed such a beautiful place and a vibrant culture before. Also, the food you cooked for me was delicious and celestial. I already miss the flavour and taste!

When I reached Dubai, I realized I left my wallet at your house. I believe it was sitting atop your piano when I was packing my stuff and I forgot to pick it up in a hurry, luckily my passport was not in the wallet, so I was still able to travel.

Still, there are some important items in my wallet so I would request you to courier it to me as soon as possible. You can send it to my office address as I spend most of my time there.

Say hello to all. Stay fine.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, still, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.04716981132 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09595382294 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556603773585 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.342557688 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341437519544 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123016982754 0.0766984524023 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106774640832 0.0603063233224 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176658138236 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144777208261 0.0580467560999 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.91 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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