In a cashless society, people use more credit cards, do you think cashless society is realistic and why? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Essay topics:

In a cashless society, people use more credit cards, do you think cashless society is realistic and why? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the usage of credit cards. This has made our life easy where everything is just a click away. There are both merits and demerits associated with this soaring trend, although, I am of opinion that the advantages outdo the disadvantages.

There is a myriad of reasons as to why cashless society is a gift to mankind. The most preponderant one is that in today's fast-paced world where people prefer to shop online without having to visit the supermarkets physically, it has made transactions not only easy but quick also. Credit cards have marked its presence in almost every field, for example, in order to pay university fees one need to go to bank physically to deposit it but can sit leisurely at home and make a transaction from credit card. There are certain applications and websites which have acted as an icing on the cake like paytm. All these advantages stand the popularity of cashless society in good stead.

However, there are some pitfalls associated with this trend. Online transactions have invited the interest of hackers. It is not uncommon that common people are targeted by phishing attack, eavesdropping attack etc. Because of these security threats people are disinclined to use online transactions.

In view of the arguments mentioned above, one can conclude that despite some demerits, the use of credit cards have benefits too great to ignore. It is irrefutable that cashless society has opened up new horizons of income and prosperity.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...de transactions not only easy but quick also. Credit cards have marked its presence ...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this security' or 'these securities'?
Suggestion: this security; these securities
...k, eavesdropping attack etc. Because of these security threats people are disinclined to use o...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, as to, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01167315175 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77753972882 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610894941634 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8178826183 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184749520647 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063086568107 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669754272866 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100246225151 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410816107922 0.056905535591 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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