You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.

Essay topics:

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.

Dear john,

I just got home safe and I am already missing our holiday spent together at your home. Thank you for inviting me for a much-needed holiday week as I was so consumed by my daily-routine that I barely used to take some time out for myself.

Since, we were enjoying ourselves a lot, I forgot my wallet at your home. While I was unpacking my luggage, I realized that my wallet was missing. At first, i was panicked that i might have left my wallet in the train on my way back home but then it came to my mind that I must have left it in your living room near the TV. It contains my ID card, car keys and headphones. I hope it is still there.

Please send it to my address through courier as I need my car keys to drive to my workplace. I am enclosing my address with this letter.

I am looking forward to meet you again.

Your friend
Sunita

Votes
Average: 6.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...d that my wallet was missing. At first, i was panicked that i might have left my ...
^
Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... missing. At first, i was panicked that i might have left my wallet in the train ...
^
Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...th this letter. I am looking forward to meet you again. Your friend Sunita
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, so, still, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 698.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.15476190476 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35268939563 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0765574048 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.4545454545 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2727272727 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221181090433 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836771814633 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620842833788 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131310215735 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788674582907 0.0580467560999 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.2 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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