Central and local governments make a frantic attempt to promote festivals to create a lot of revenue. Some people think this money should be invested in social programmes for the poor.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Authorities and central governments engross to promote festivals and ceremonies as they are admirably profitable. Some people think that the money which are come from such kind of events should be spent on social programmes for the poor. I completely agree with this statement.
Firstly, investing money to the social programmes which aid to impulse the condition of the poor is the best way of eschewing from the increasing level of crime. Because , in some states , where the poor have been left with the legacy of redundancy or unsatisfactory lives , tend to commit crimes , organize truces and prevail contradicting views against government more often than other class people. Therefore, taking care of the poor , establishing social programmes , and employing them should be high on the agenda of the state.
Secondly , social programmes which embody helping to the poor and providing better lives not solely aid to rescue from different incidences, but they proliferate the reputation of the state in front of the national and international audience. For example, as battered living conditions and unemployment of the poor discredit the government , grappling with these problems and overcoming them provide a great chance to authorities to earn a reputation and putting paid to unpleasant situations. Therefore , countries should bend their efforts to provide productive , fulfilling lives and making betterments to their lifestyle.
In conclusion, I reckon that pumping fiscal into the social programmes which is for the lower class people is the most effective way of maintaining the pre-eminent stability of the society and increasing it's social status.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i reckon, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49609375 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00570669092 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59765625 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2916042311 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.7 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281368945094 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113160037264 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700855158353 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180059720029 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107510511376 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.