Students are becoming more and more reliant on computers.What are some of the problems associated with reliance on computers, and what are some of the possible solutions?
As computers are consoling the study process of the students, they are becoming enslaved to this device. There are a plethora of problems which over reliance might stoke , hence , action should be taken immediately. This essay explores the problems as well as solutions related to this ominous trend.
Over dependence on computers may ravage students both physically and mentally. From the physical perspectives, it might induce health turmoils such as faltering of eye vision or numerous skeletal illnesses. The mos of the scientists are concerning that the life expectancy of the people who spend stretch of hours in front of the screen would last crudely 29-35 years. In terms of mental difficulties, being overly reliant on this technology might cause psychological disorders like high level of stress and abrasiveness. Because students typically use computers over half and even whole night and do not sleep well. As a result, this process might led to depression and curve the seeds of the illness so-called "sleeplessness" in the future.
Tackles which are aimed to overcome this difficulty should be carried out immediately. The first solution to this problem would be curbing the length of the time students spend for this device . Parents should control their child's usage of the computer and sometimes should keep the rein tightly. Another tackle is that shaping healthy view in youngsters in terms of utilising this device . This can only be done by informing and impressing the adverse consequences of over reliance on computers. As a result of this viable solutions, we can achieve merger boom in which discouraging youth from over using this technology.
In conclusion, I reckon that, despite many problems which remain behind being dependent in computers , we can easily remove the obstacles by providing appropriate solutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, so, well, i reckon, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36301369863 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0055894602 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630136986301 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8802545496 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117032751773 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438814649488 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405098829381 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827262337619 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264642826671 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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