Characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Give your opinion.
Innate characteristics have a preponderant impact on our life as they are nature of a person and have a supreme effect on personality. In addition to this, experiences are also of prime importance. But they are sometimes neglected.
The qualities we are born with whether positive or negative have a pivotal role in determining our personality. The traits like sagacity, being tenacious in passion etc are a sign for a bright future while the characteristics like sluggishness, anomie etc are obstacles towards a majestic future. It is very important to mould innate characteristics according to the need of the time to live a successful life ahead. The role of parents is parallerly important in polishing the qood qualities or uprooting the negative ones. For example, Nelson Mandela was a born philanthropist. He acknowledged it and whole life he stuggled for his people. Today his lifetime endeavour is a beacon of light for oppressed ones.
Experiences enlighten us a right path and direction to move on. They are vital for a composed personality and maturity as they shield us from extreme damages in life. Not only experiences reflect the true face of life but also act as a mentor to modify our by birth characteristics. For example, scientists learn more and more from their experiences and this thing help them a lot in serving mankind. These experiences also enable them to invent new things without major failures because experiences keep on enhancing their knowledge and boosting their confidence.
To recapitulate, qualities we are born with have a conspicuous affect on our life. Moreover, the importance of experiences is unprecedented to earn cache in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07522123894 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21699674471 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58407079646 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1488288204 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9285714286 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1428571429 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291476029246 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912672375623 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102807631031 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20617510157 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751071170143 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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