The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course The table shows the salaries of anthropologists in work after five years Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the m

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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of anthropologists in work after five years.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The following chart illustrates the destination of Anthropology students of a specific university who finish undergraduate degree course, with the table depicting Anthropologists’ income after 5 years’ work.
As can be clearly observed from the chart, the majority of graduates select full-time work by 52%. Followed by part-time work which its share is 15%. The percentage of graduates who are unemployed is 12%. While part-time work along with postgraduate study consists of 5% that is the smallest share, the proportion of graduates who pursue their postgraduate studies and not known graduates is equivalent to 8%.
With regard to the table, there are three distinctive types of employments including Freelance consultants, Government sector, and Private companies. While 5% of Freelance consultants earn salary between $25000 to $49999, 15% of them gain $50000 to $74999 and 40% of Anthropology graduates work as freelancer consultants make $75000 to $99999 income. The same percentage of them gain more than $100000 as their salaries. In Government sector, 5% of graduates make less than $49999 salary, whereas 50% of graduates who have the opportunity to work in this sector can earn more than $100000. Meanwhile, 15% of graduates earn $50000 to $74999 and 30% of them gain between $75000 to $99999.
The last sector is private companies which pay from $25000 up to $49999 to 10% of their graduates’ employees. Followed by 25% with salary of $75000 to $99999, 30% with more than $100000 income, and 35% of graduates earn $50000 to $74999.
It is clear from the table that graduates earn maximum amount of income in government sector which is more than $100000 by 50%. Followed by freelancer consultants and private companies, by 40% and 30%, respectively.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13829787234 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97840466042 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482269503546 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7845320062 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181596292649 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697485300001 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747395754038 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127621813159 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092874034782 0.056905535591 163% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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