The pie charts explains the agewise distribution of population in two countries Yemen and Italy in the year 2000 and expectations of the year 2050.
Overall in Yemen, younger children and adults upto the age of 60 were in higher proportions with elderly individuals in negligible numbers. But in Italy, old aged populations and people between 15 to 60 were in accountable portions and children upto the age of 14 was in lesser percentages.
Moving on to the details of Yemen, half of the populations of 2000 was filled up by children upto the age of 14 where as it reduced to just a quarter by 2050. At the same time people between age 15 and 60 years was 46.3 % in 2000 and supposed to go up to 57.3 % by 2050. In both these years elderly persona with age 60 and above remained negligible, 3.6 % and 5.7 % respectively.
Next looking into informations of Italy, in both 2000 and 2050, incontrast to Yemen elderly people were in significant proportions which comes to be 24.1% and 42.3%.In this population younger childrens between age 0 to 14 years were 14.3 % and 11.5 % in 2000 and 2050,which were in small proportions with respect to Yemen. Age varying from 15 to 59 yaers marked the largest proportions and it was 61.6 % and 46.2 % seperately and was almost comparable to Yemen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71111111111 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79963894594 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502222222222 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0970943179 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.125 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200472585497 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097584930499 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542783603109 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137747756191 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348098972186 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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