A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your locality.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community.
Do you support or oppose the factory establishment?
It is believed that, factories and workshops are increasing with in time nowadays. Especially, after the Industrial Revolution, this case seem mostly because of production requirement.Business advantages such as increasing economic condition, employment and disadvantages such as pollution, increasing population and traffic problem.
To start with, a place which give new business area via factory give many chance to people for their economic condition and career. This mean that with increasing factory, many shopping centers, malls, restaurants open. In this case, the city, which have factory develop with not only economy, which is created by factories but also the shops, which contribute to employment. In addition, career possibilities increase for new graduated young. Thus, both unemployment and economic development increase in the city.
At the same time, there are many disadvantages about opening factory and new business area in near location. Factory cause air pollution with releasing fumes from factory’s pipes. Therefore, many animals and plants can die. Moreover, new disease can appear among the people. On the other side, density population increase because of this traffic problems can be saw. In this case, stress rate rise in the community. Thus, both people’ mental health and body health can fall in danger.
To sum up, when everything is taken into account, location which has many business area and factory can give many chance to its environment but it can bring many disadvantages. Hopefully, disadvantages will be taken attention by company and they will provide advantages to their near site mostly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Business
...ostly because of production requirement.Business advantages such as increasing economic ...
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Line 2, column 71, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun chance seems to be countable; consider using: 'many chances'.
Suggestion: many chances
...give new business area via factory give many chance to people for their economic condition ...
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Line 4, column 111, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun chance seems to be countable; consider using: 'many chances'.
Suggestion: many chances
...many business area and factory can give many chance to its environment but it can bring man...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in addition, such as, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.608 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01428333108 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.0435773091 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.625 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171176871569 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592257237736 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451441645399 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107072588301 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262329964191 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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