Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Everybody knows that tourism sector is a quite valuable whole world and every country works for taking advantage from tourism sector. And also, all countries work on their touristic place for touristic attraction and in certain period of the year they make regulations. Countries give importance it because if looked from two main perspectives, economic and cultural advantages are seen about tourism sector. Because of this reason, international tourism do not cause cultural tension, unlike it bring global thinking shape and understanding between people in a country.
To start with, tourism sector is very profitable because tourists can bring exchange to countries. Therefore, both tourist and domestic people can benefit economically. Moreover, some business person tourists can attempt to trade with domestic people or government. In addition, government and domestic people can work together for it. Thus, this possibilities can reveal state’s economy. Hence, if there are these profitable economic tools in tourism, we can see positive side of international tourism for people who have different culture.
Secondly, cultural differences create cultural richness, so domestic people can obtain global thinking shape and they can learn be understanding. And also, tourists can expand the domestic people’ horizon. For example, tourist can give information about own country’s food, so domestic people can set up restaurant which relate to different culture’s food. Thus, domestic people see advantageous side of the tourism.
Finally, we can realize written above, while there are many positive approach about cultural richness and economic advantages, we can not mention the negative side of the international tourism about tension which is created by different cultures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, hence, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81132075472 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94817222582 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588679245283 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.9109898636 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205638233831 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814261724838 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721547631578 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140948566268 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436283837066 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.12 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.