A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community.
Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is a controversial issue wherein people are talking about what kind of impact on our society if a huge factory will be built. Some glad to see this happen because it brings some aspects of benefit to local people. Others believe that there are several drawbacks of this development such as pollution and traffic problems. I think that there are more advantages than disadvantages and this essay is going to explain my reason for it.
One of the many advantages of this development is being able to reduce the unemployment rate in that area, if a company could built a new factory, they might needed to hire more people. Moreover, it also can boost local economy due to the fact is that people who come from other city are need many things to help them live in our community. For example, there are some restaurants, supermarkets and accommodations were opened after government decided to change the purpose of land from farming to
Industry. Hence, some residents are support that factory should be built because it can make them gain more profit than before.
However, this changing also have some negative impact on our environment. Most people concern that factory would produce a lot of exhaust emissions and make air quality worse if the company did not deal with it properly. In addition, traffic problems might increase such as traffic congestion, car accident and parking issue during the rush hours. In my case, now I have to spend an hour to commute compare with few years ago it only took me 30 minutes.
In conclusion, although this new influence have some drawbacks but I still believe it can brings more benefit to us. If government and company can work together to face every problem, they may find the best solution to create a win-win situation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'build'
Suggestion: build
...t rate in that area, if a company could built a new factory, they might needed to hir...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ange the purpose of land from farming to Industry. Hence, some residents are supp...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ears ago it only took me 30 minutes. In conclusion, although this new influence...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
...me drawbacks but I still believe it can brings more benefit to us. If government and c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8393442623 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56403085643 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2041547226 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.428571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121251121488 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409145101882 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364755318083 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658813622067 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248469430075 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.