Competitiveness is considered to be a positive quality among people. How does competitiveness affect individuals?
Is competitiveness a positive or negative quality?
These days, it is noticeable that competitiveness is considered as a positive value among people. There could be a lot of reasons for this attitude, and I think competitiveness is a positive trait because it provides motivation in a society.
Generally, people like to be the best in any situation and reach the highest rank. They want to be terrific at their work, studies, family and society, and they do their best to achieve these goals. The first effect of competitiveness is that everyone in a normal society try to be first-rate. Beside perfectionism, the second effect that could be mentioned is ambition. Competitiveness compels people to be ambitious with many goals and desires which can cause a lot of invention and innovation.
In sociology and psychology, competitiveness is condemned by many. Although it has both positive and negative aspects, I believe the weight of positive points is heavier than the negative points. I think without competitiveness, people would become idle and their motivation and enthusiasm will diminish little by little, which could be harmful for people and their modern society. Competitiveness is a positive quality because it can cause a lot of developments like in education, training, businesses, etc. Countries with high competitiveness scores are more successful in achieving economic growth than others with low scores.
In conclusion, I personally think that as a result of competitiveness, the world is getting better for living, and it makes people happy. In the future, as a result of competitiveness we will have a higher level of health, education, technology, economy and infrastructure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, thus, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40063298418 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544061302682 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1678975206 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4285714286 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379984860903 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124929199214 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827228416073 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222711996907 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101990821191 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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