Competitiveness is considered to be a positive quality among people.
How does competitiveness affect individuals?
Is competitiveness a positive or negative qualities?
You should write at least 250 Words.
It is true that the benefits of competition are noticeable among people. Competition causes several problems, and in my opinion, it has equal advantages and disadvantages.
People’s personality easily changes when they focus on competition with others in their lives. for instance, a person who wants to get promoted at work must work hard and suffer from a lack of sleep, so they may lose their temper easily at work and become known as an unpleasant character among their colleagues and lose their social graces. In addition, competitiveness can causes conflicts among many people, and that causes rare mental disorders. for example, a person who is pessimistic about other people is always afraid of what they might do.
from my perspective, being in competition with others has as much positive effects as negative effects. Firstly, competition can cause one’s personality to develop . For example, competitiveness can cause development at work because it helps you deal with difficulties and get through tough situations. Although it makes our life challenging, it also makes it more attractive since we have an aim. Another positive aspect is gaining knowledge; during a competition we can learn new skills and how to use them in different situation. On the other hand, it has many disadvantages. Seeing the more unpleasant aspect of somebody is one of the most popular disadvantages of competitiveness. Moreover, it can cause conflict between people and relatives which is the most important thing for any person.
in conclusion, competition has advantages and disadvantages together, and it can influence on people’s personality in term of their traits and other aspects of their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33828996283 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13963118067 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568773234201 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5047667808 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21962463009 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846887055399 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658089312411 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142932377317 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435753876001 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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