As computers can translate all languages very quickly and accurately, learning a foreign language is a waste of time. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, thanks to the advanced computers with high precision in translation, it is sometimes argued that being a bilingual is not as beneficial as it used to be. However, I do not agree that technology can meet all human's need in learning new languages.
For a variety of reasons it would be wrong to just rely on various computer programs or different websites to understand a second language. Firstly, it is evident that in today's globalized world mastering one or more foreign languages can open up a tone of career opportunities to people. In fact, in similar circumstances in terms of educational background or relevant work experiences, a multilingual candidate is more likely to be selected for a specified position, without considering their ability to use translator applications. Secondly, knowing other languages, in addition to mother tongue, people are able to understand different cultures deeply. For instance, the more travelers gain a profound insight into local languages natives are speaking, the more they enrich their experiences; which is undoubtedly impossible just by using technology.
At the same time, from an individual perspective, learning a foreign language is one of the best way to enhance the mind potential. It has been proved that as people are aging, the capacity of their brain cells are decreasing unless they keep their mind active by practicing a new language they had not been familiar before. In other words, no matter how old people are, dominating a different language not only is not a waste of time, but also can follow a series of positive results such as memory improvement, longer attention span and a reduced risk of age-related cognitive decline. In contrast, depending on computers to understand various text written in foreign languages or communicate with people around the world may be considered as a temporary solution which can make people's mind to be less efficient gradually.
In conclusion, although progressive translator applications can assist people in emergency situations, I believe that people are yet required to learn at least one foreign language to take its advantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 790, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind being'.
Suggestion: mind being
...mporary solution which can make peoples mind to be less efficient gradually. In conclu...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ind to be less efficient gradually. In conclusion, although progressive transl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, at least, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2915451895 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07317395658 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609329446064 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5824582586 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.25 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5833333333 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6666666667 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239071379101 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847722860696 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061395803151 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143306021941 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03667722946 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.