In contemporary society, everyone should have equal opportunities in education. Therefore, universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Every individual must have same opportunities in education in the present time so education sectors should give equal preference to both genders in every field. I completely agree with this statement and the agreement will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, gender discrimination can be overcome if the university give equal opportunities to the men and women. They can choose subjects according to their personal interest and achieve their goals and brings laurens the name of their nation. Moreover, this trend can also impacts on the dominance character of males and encourage females which can helps others women to become leaders in the society. For instance, Rawanda has 53% of females in the parliament. As a result of this, women can become fearless and independently choose their life with their own potential.
Furthermore, there are many regions, where females have not enough good personality as compared to men but with the help of education they can become educated and aware people and act as a example for others. Along with it, it is a basic right of every individual to get education. Additionally, it give rise to many qualities among both genders such as cooperation, socialization and honesty by which they can make their future bright due to this, they can boost their confidence and self-esteam.
In conclusion, education is a basic requirement of every individual and educational sectors have the responsibility to provide better education to the both sexes because pupils are the future of the nation and they will become the honour of their country if they recieve good knowledge.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'impact'
Suggestion: impact
...r nation. Moreover, this trend can also impacts on the dominance character of males and...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...me educated and aware people and act as a example for others. Along with it, it i...
^
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
...dual to get education. Additionally, it give rise to many qualities among both gende...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19245283019 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90039709536 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554716981132 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5888458502 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.090909091 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151519272832 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633178337886 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678596170787 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108779282321 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646839714712 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'impact'
Suggestion: impact
...r nation. Moreover, this trend can also impacts on the dominance character of males and...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...me educated and aware people and act as a example for others. Along with it, it i...
^
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
...dual to get education. Additionally, it give rise to many qualities among both gende...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19245283019 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90039709536 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554716981132 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5888458502 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.090909091 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151519272832 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633178337886 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678596170787 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108779282321 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646839714712 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.