The continued rise in the world population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.
What are the causes of this rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
According to World Statistics, by 2050, the human population will increase exponentially to 10 billion. Indeed, it is said that the unstoppable growth of the number of people is the biggest threat the planet is facing today. This essay will explore the reasons in the continued rise of population and will discuss why it is considered as the greatest problem of humanity.
To begin with, there are myriad of problems the world is encountering and to some the rise in population is the first on the long list. This is because of the unmeasured detrimental effects it represents. In addition, those effects of the growing population branch out to more serious problems; for instance, the increase in population is directly proportional to the rise in poverty rate which may redound to the growth in crime rate and hunger. Thus, the rising population serves as the root cause of more dilemmas.
There are some causes of the rapid acceleration of the number of human race. Firstly, mortality rate is decreasing while the number of children born is continuously rising. As a result, there is a wide discrepancy in the balance of the population rate; the number of death is not equal to the number of birth so it adds up to the number of people living. Moreover, the increase in birth rate is connected to the improper use of contraception which means that more humans are unaware and uneducated about the importance of family planning. Lastly, as technology advances, the mode of transportation is also developing, a reason why many people migrate to countries or areas where the opportunities are abundant.
Henceforth, this author believes that this problem in population is superior. Aforementioned the direct connection in the rise of the number of people and poverty, which leads to more serious problem, the number of unemployed also increases, so some people will resort in doing crimes like theft and robbery. Apart from this, food scarcity becomes an issue as many people to feed, food sources can’t suffice the need of the growing population, then hunger and malnutrition will arise from this problem. Therefore, the many issues the world is facing cannot be resolve unless finding solution to the tremendous growth of human population.
To recapitulate, the increase of the living humans is truly the greatest problem of the world which will soon leads to far more serious issues. In my opinion, there are solutions that the government and the people can do together to address this growing dilemma. The country should educate its people about the importance of family planning and subsidize contraceptive products for those in lower income level. We, people should contribute as well by religiously complying with the program of the government in controlling population growth.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2344.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 458.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11790393013 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85793431737 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486899563319 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 738.9 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3863341421 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.2 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291509348382 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902397921399 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684132429928 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172266010264 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693810503944 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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