Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.
Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
At this present day and age, people have various ways in spending their free time and the best activity that will benefit the human mind becomes highly debatable. Whilst others believe that allotting time in reading and answering word puzzles enhances the mental status of an individual which makes it more valuable, some people argue that it is vital to rest during this leisure time. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and will give the authors perspective about this matter.
To begin with, it is pivotal to use leisure times in doing things that improves the brain activity. Firstly, the mind will be stimulated to perform more creative thinking process if it is exposed to some activities that use thinking. In addition, the human brain will be able to divert consciousness and for a moment replace pre-occupied thoughts by keeping it focus in certain tasks during a person’s free time. To further elaborate, a study shows that people who read or play scrabble as their past time have a wider range of vocabulary and language understanding than those who are not, also, they readers are more open-minded and knowledgeable as they continue learning through reading. Thus, exposing the brain to stimuli during these activities is a way of exercising it to be more functional.
Notwithstanding, some people think that it is better to spend leisure hours by resting the mind. This is because despite the paramount working capacity of the brain to interpret information, it also needs to take a break from stimulus. For instance, there are individuals whose works require a lot of thinking like the scientists or engineers, they are more exposed to external factors that can lead to stress which is not healthy for their mental status. As a result, they need some times to stay away from stimuli to prevent their mind from over thinking. Moreover, relaxation of the brain during free time is important to keep the sanity intact as we are all experiencing stressful situations not only at work but also in the environment and dealing with others.
Henceforth, both sides of the argument are compelling and the best way to resolve this issue is to find balance in activities during free time as they are both beneficial. Mind stimulating leisure activities like reading and word puzzles prove its advantages to human brain as well as the mind relaxation. A person can spend time doing these activities when he or she feels not too exhausted as his or her brain is not prone to over working. However, after experiencing a stressful week, it is better to rest the mind for a moment to help it regain its energy and freshen up the thoughts from the external stimulus.
To recapitulate, spending leisure time is really important part of a healthy being. It depends on the person’s preference on how he or she will use the time either doing activities or just resting the mind which both have merits. Keeping mental status at the best shape is the main priority.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2491.0 1615.20841683 154% => OK
No of words: 507.0 315.596192385 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91321499014 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69410969165 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483234714004 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 774.9 506.74238477 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0899943492 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.55 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.35 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386959219756 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118973472408 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075649888864 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228237611677 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184884927282 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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