You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.
Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
You should write at least 250 words.
Some people think it is significant to spend spare time on mind improving activities such as reading or doing word puzzles, while some argue that it is more important to give the brain a rest during leisure time. In my opinion, I believe that it is essential to rest the mind for better work performance.
On the one hand, mind improving activities can help people to gain more knowledge and learn more skills. Some people would like to spend their leisure time reading different categories of book, such as history or math, which is one good way to gain knowledge and add value to themselves. Moreover, mind improving activities allow people to learn some certain skills which could apply to their work. For example, reading books about business management helps business owners to generate an idea about managing a company, or doing word puzzles improve their problem- solving skill.
On the other hand, some people would like to use their leisure time to take a break time from their busy working schedules. There are some equally meaningful activities for people who would like to rest their mind, such as a family picnic or meeting new people from their community. These activities are important for people to build their social skills which cannot be learned by reading or doing word puzzles. More importantly, there are lots of people who are required to work overtime due to the competitive work environment, it is critical for these people to rest their brain in their spare time for further performance in work.
Finally, in my opinion, it is necessary to do self-care activities for maintaining mental health and well- being. People can decide what activities to do in their spare time as long as the activities are helpful to reduce stress. For some careers, workers could suffer from mental illness due to high level of stress at work. For example, social worker, most social workers are required to work with the vulnerable in the society and witness lots of horrible events, such as child removal, some would suffer from PTSD because of the stress and lack of self- care. Therefore, it is significant that people take their time and decide what activities are best to improve their mental status.
To conclude, either doing mind improving activities or rest the mind during leisure time, there are some positive impacts on the individuals. People should make sure that they have enough time to rest their mind to avoid developing poor mental health.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2072.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98076923077 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43672585757 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447115384615 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9778107538 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.882352941 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4705882353 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392618864573 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156151113368 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101106894855 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281619784747 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104699226731 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.