The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.
What are the causes of this continued rise?
Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
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<b><i><span style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:107%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
mso-ascii-theme-font:minor-latin;mso-fareast-font-family:Calibri;mso-fareast-theme-font:
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EN-US;mso-bidi-language:AR-SA">In this modernization aeon, population of world
has been continuously growing up by leaps and bound. There are numerous reasons
behind it. In many developing and under-developing countries, people who have given
birth to their children in the maximum numbers have been identified illiterate.
That is why, they do not have adequate sense of family planning. So that many
severe complications have arisen for humanity across the globe.</span></i></b>
First of all, it can be unquestionably articulated that the constant and rapid growth in population would be a leading reason for destruction of society. As per the survey conducted by USA government, many countries from Asia have been found having a very huge hike in population of people, for instance, India and China both are such types of countries where population is being increased around the clock, due to which, growing numbers of dangerous obstacles have been unfortunately ascended in many significant sectors of our life like basic and fundamental amenities. Scarcity of pure drinking water, insufficient employment, basic and fundamental facilities for food, water and shelter have occurred.
Secondly, government should revamp education system and encourage a fair amount of uneducated people towards education, because, the proverb I stated here “There is no learning, there will be no earning”. So education at the satisfactory level has to be made obligatory for them. This will definitely bring prominent changes and revolution in their life. With the assistance of education, we would be quite able to find the solution this serious problem.
Thirdly, the major problems like poverty, terrorism, nepotism, unemployment and pollution would be surely solved. Because education is key solution of all the prime hurdles and troubles. However, governments from many developing and under developing nations have gone failed to cure this dangerous problem to save humanity on the planet.
To sum up, education should be accelerated in order to see the whole world problem free and better eco- friendly in order to pursue healthy and wealthy life style.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, as to, for instance, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2398.0 1615.20841683 148% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 7.03225806452 5.12529762239 137% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 10.1534938543 2.80592935109 362% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648093841642 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.60771543086 131% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 163.872091041 49.4020404114 332% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.866666667 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.38176352705 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114373715993 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354942960251 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295013366541 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0400538417304 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361533986998 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 6.84 50.2224549098 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.8 11.3001002004 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 23.79 12.4159519038 192% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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