The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.
What are the causes of this continued rise?
Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
First of all, it can be unquestionably articulated that the constant and rapid growth in population would be a leading reason for destruction of society. As per the survey conducted by USA government, many countries from Asia have been found having a very huge hike in population of people, for instance, India and China both are such types of countries where population is being increased around the clock, due to which, growing numbers of dangerous obstacles have been unfortunately ascended in many significant sectors of our life like basic and fundamental amenities. Scarcity of pure drinking water, insufficient employment, basic and fundamental facilities for food, water and shelter have occurred.
Secondly, government should revamp education system and encourage a fair amount of uneducated people towards education, because, the proverb I stated here “There is no learning, there will be no earning”. So education at the satisfactory level has to be made obligatory for them. This will definitely bring prominent changes and revolution in their life. With the assistance of education, we would be quite able to find the solution this serious problem.
Thirdly, the major problems like poverty, terrorism, nepotism, unemployment and pollution would be surely solved. Because education is key solution of all the prime hurdles and troubles. However, governments from many developing and under developing nations have gone failed to cure this dangerous problem to save humanity on the planet.
To sum up, education should be accelerated in order to see the whole world problem free and better eco- friendly in order to pursue healthy and wealthy life style.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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First of all, it can be unquestionably a...
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... pursue healthy and wealthy life style.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, as to, for instance, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44827586207 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96023071718 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674329501916 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.1202852693 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.272727273 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.098283946141 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377545226748 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301979003273 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631251932017 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02781302261 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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