Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In modern life, due to the availability of similar goods around the world, many nations are looking alike. And many people start to consider the positive and negative effects that this phenomenon provides. From my own view, this circumstance could have both advantages and disadvantages in equal measure.
On one hand, having the same goods anywhere has numerous benefits for both consumers and companies. From the customers' perspective view, instead of going abroad to get stuff they desire to get, they can access local shops or supermarkets and search for those products, which create opportunities for people to spend more time for other jobs or their family, friends. Moreover, without traveling overseas, buyers can save a significant amount of money since they are no longer to pay taxes. In terms of producers, they can earn more profit because many people tend to buy stuff in their local area, especially when they are in an urgent situation. Thus, competition between companies will motivate them for more creativity, innovation for their products, which help them earn the reputation and trust of customers.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks to this development. Firstly, some local products might be affected since an enormous amount of good products they can purchase in other countries such as Japan or Germany, which can push them to bankrupt and jobless for many workers. Secondly, this situation can deteriorate a nation’s culture. As a result, domestic product will act as a replacement for the cultural one.
In conclusion, this phenomenon has both beneficial and detrimental effects on individuals and companies, so people should weigh the pros and cons to balance the situation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
... both consumers and companies. From the customers perspective view, instead of going abro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25090909091 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7643635407 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607272727273 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4880506685 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.076923077 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175659686027 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605268539839 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392516429629 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959422729998 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305613606847 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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