Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Entrance fees of numerous museum is considered as one of the most concern problems in modern society. Some people believe this phenomenon can bring beneficial effects for the museum and the economy, while others argue that the drawbacks of this action can surpass the advantages. Personally, I think the positive side of the situation is far more exceed the opposite side.
On the one hand, the rise of admission charge on citizens can limit people to come to the museum again. They are discouraged to access useful knowledge freely, especially the poor since they are unable to afford such expenditure or they will spend that money on the worthy items, services. From the museum’s perspective view, this will reduce this institution’s attraction because of the lack of guests come to this place. Moreover, this detrimental effect may force the operators to close down some historical locations as they lose more and more customers.
Despite the disadvantages mentioned above, entrance charges can be beneficial in various ways. Most prominently, the income from admission tickets provides long-term benefits, not only for electric payments or operation fees but also to improve the infrastructure and the artifacts. In addition, this improvement will attract more guests to visit the museum. In terms of the economy, since the museum’s operation charges can be paid by these ticket fees, governments are no longer provide support budgets for these buildings, so the money can be used for other urgent needs. Finally, employees’ salary can be paid by using this profit, which can prevent the unemployment problem.
In conclusion, while the negative impacts from entrance fees are inevitable, the advantages of this effect are way more surpass than the counterpart.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, moreover, so, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32740213523 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82521040045 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5871886121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.002408079 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.153846154 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225152563028 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790520860247 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072055872901 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125696370832 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523674190369 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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