creative artist should always be given the freedom to express their own idea in words, pictures, music etc in whichever they wish. there should no government restrictions on what they do.
to what extend do you agree with this opinion ?
Freedom is an essential right that human being have in their life, especially when it comes to freedom of speech and expression. Without it, life will remain stagnant and it causes for art not to be felt. However, freedom also has its own limit where someone can not force anybody or anyone to express things the way they want to show. It is believed as act of unwise when expressing such right without consideration. I personally believe, that freedom of expression and speech has to be restricted wisely for the sake of human's privacy sector.
As it factually acknowledged by people, the freedom itself has its own limit of expression. It is limited by others rights, values and point of views. The artisan based on this case, therefore, has to pay attention to whether his/her artsy expression effecting one's life both negatively and positively. Asking for the result of expression to be felt equally is impossible, because everybody's understandings are different one another. People may react differently toward artistic objects that they sense, and in this issue an it is recommended for the artisan to describe his/her right of expression appropriately. Comprehensive way in illustrating the art will reveal the truth that as an artisan, a person has to act base on universal view not an individual understanding.
Moreover, both local and national municipality have to introduce a law that is used to control the art world wisely without hesitation. As an obeyed institution, a democratic government has to follow majority voice, it was revealed by the FOX News that there were so many people committed suicide because of failing to understand one's art critique on social media. Nowadays people are acting like an Actor on TV, they think it is excellence for them to run after their actor for life styles where in-fact they can not afford it. It is because they have different attitude toward the so called expression. This was a matter which resulted in many people whom ending-up their life for the sake of others attitude.
To summarize, I personally believe that, introducing comprehensive law toward art restriction is not a simple task to be done by government. However, the society might be helped through the involvement in supporting the government to accomplish the law to be useful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04712041885 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92574139669 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534031413613 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8504121502 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.111111111 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146050777749 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484779843439 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329626886842 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092877298241 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252563304863 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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