Creative artist should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this op

The art is becoming a way of economic income for a growing group of people which know as artists, while it is more indispensable for current life as the rise of contemporary social economy. A new viewpoint is pointed out that artists should have unlimited freedom for creating since the invaluable artistic treasure they have brought to humankind. In this essay, two reasons will be addressed that why this opinion should be criticized.

The first reason why artists should be restricted is that unrestricted artistic creation could break the law hence breach the social harmony. Because if one section of society have supreme power to do what they want and without any punishments, it is conspicuous that some of them will do something illegal for creating arts or just for sparking inspirations. For example, a director might filmed a killing scene using the real person just for animated effects, or a singer will take drugs for composing a song. Whatever which will happen, it is not a positive influence for this world. Therefore, artistic creation should be carried on within the range of legal permission.

Moreover, even the creation is under the legal supervision, these wayward artists could bring an other negative impact for our society as well. Due to the artistic creation is encouraged excessively, this superior group will be enlarging over time. As a result that the other areas of social development will be lack of devoting, which will leads to a series of consequences. For instance, current computers might still be the most advanced computing devices after few decades since no one would like to develop information technology.

To conclude, artists should not have unrestricted rights because of the potential of illegal activities and the uneven of social development.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: AN_OTHER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'another'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: another
...sion, these wayward artists could bring an other negative impact for our society as well...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17123287671 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81084908595 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585616438356 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5462428739 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.153846154 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20140011931 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779416902241 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539821214985 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122596018306 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476293539742 0.056905535591 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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