Crime is a big problem in the world; many people believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.
In recent decades, it is undeniable that crime has been one of the most serious issues facing governments. Therefore, methods to deal with it have been widely debated. Some believe that crime is a problem that can not be avoided. While this may be true to a certain extent, I would argue that there are some viable measures to curb crimes.
It is irrefutable that crime is a serious problem that could lead to severe consequences. Those who commit crimes would have to suffer from great disadvantages. They would be deprived of liberties as they are imprisoned due to their misdeed. In addition, they would likely be isolated from society even after they have served their sentence. Crimes could be a great danger to residents from all over the world. Thefts, burglars, murders would pose a significant threat to the safety of the population, driving them to live in fear and worry. Consequently, the standards of living of those who reside in areas rampant with illegal activities may reduce substantially. Therefore, crimes are no doubt one of the most serious issues facing modern society.
While some people argue that there are no feasible measures to curb the growth of crimes, I believe that governments could adopt some methods to deal with this problem. First, schools can provide more lessons teaching students virtues and moral codes to prevent juvenile delinquency. Second, governments should provide vocational training for prisoners. Thanks to this, they could be equipped with job-related skills; thus having more chances to blend in with the society after serving their sentence and reducing recidivism. Third, states should implement punitive measures to make criminals reflect on their mistakes so that they would not re-offend in the future. This method would also deter those who intend to commit crimes, hence helping to prevent unlawful acts.
In conclusion, I believe that although crime is a serious problem in modern society, there are some feasible solutions governments could adopt to remedy the situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
...me feasible solutions governments could adopt to remedy the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, hence, if, may, second, so, therefore, third, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21580547112 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63084614312 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534954407295 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3000592468 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3157894737 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3157894737 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42105263158 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138440123465 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507550064833 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610912375054 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967053255357 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275232940053 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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