Cyclists and car drivers sharing the same road cause some problems. What are the problems? What are the solutions?
There is a controversial opinion about the case of cyclists and car drivers who are travelling on the same road. In this essay, I will outline several reasons for this and put forward some feasible measures to address this problem.
There is no denying that sharing the same road has an extremely negative impact on the travel experience of both motorists and cyclists, as it can increase the mortality rate on these roads. Moreover, different types of transport have different speeds, and automobiles tend to move much faster than bicycles. As a result, car drivers and cyclists may be at greater risk of a collision and injury to both. For example, the increasing rate of serious accidents among cyclists in Vietnam is due to riding on the same road as other vehicles. Therefore, the fact that two vehicles share the same road can cause inevitable accidents and threaten the safety of drivers.
In order to address this issue, there are a number of viable solutions. Firstly, the government should establish separate lanes for these two vehicles so that their different speeds will not bother each other, as in the aforementioned situations. Furthermore, the authorities should make traffic laws and severely punish those who break the rules or go in the wrong lane to avoid traffic accidents.
In conclusion, there are two main contributors to the problem: Poor driving habits and the lack of enforcement of traffic laws. Both of these problems need to be addressed in order to reduce the number of traffic accidents.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02362204724 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73347451859 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594488188976 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0819263761 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230423187118 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077983770138 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674098303478 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127215843885 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840488025306 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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