Death penalty should be abolished. Do you agree or disagree ?
Many people agree that the death penalty is necessary to maintain the effectiveness of the public security system. Although there are some drawbacks to the death penalty, I agree that without it we would be more helpless in the face of violence.
Given a variety of circumstances, the death penalty may be considered as an inappropriate form of punishment. The most well-founded argument is that we do not reserve the right to kill other individuals. Regardless of an individual's actions, the right to life is a fundamental right that cannot be violated. Honest people may also run against incorrect execution. Such irrational sentences take innocent people's lives from them and make other citizens lose faith in justice and regulation. Hoodlums occasionally apologize for their protests as well. They ought to be given a second chance to improve themselves in this circumstance.
Nevertheless, I acknowledge that the public generally holds the death penalty to be fundamental. It is first and foremost an effective deterrent to serious wrongdoings. The best way to deter someone from committing crime is to demonstrate the outcomes of their actions. For instance, Pakistan's government has slowed down the use of illegal intimidation by allowing the execution of members of oppressor organizations who rely on fear. Additionally, the legislators spend a significant portion of the public budget on maintaining the prisoners. All things considered, this money can be used for governmental aid to individuals as well as public improvement.
In conclusion, even if it comes with some drawbacks, I believe that the death sentence is ultimately the most efficient means of reducing crime, cutting government spending, and deterring others from breaking the law
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42545454545 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22062772999 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632727272727 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.188625188 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.25 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195086224201 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593703400714 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716605020528 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118284902338 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727046452906 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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